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My essay is about 'the impact of technology on communication'. I argue that while technology has enhanced our capacity to communicate instantly across the globe, it has also created new barriers due to digital divides and online miscommunication.
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In my scholarly exploration titled 'The Dual-edged Sword of Technological Communication', I cont that despite its transformative potential for instantaneous global connectivity which revolutionizes interpersonal interactions, technology's penetration is not uniformly distributed. It creates an intricate web where the facilitation of instant messages and the exchange of ideas across continents coexist alongside the emergence of new barriers. These barriers primarily manifest in two forms: digital divides that perpetuate inequality in access to technological resources, thereby limiting certn communities' participation in contemporary discourse; and online miscommunications which often result from the abstraction of interactions into binary coded exchanges, potentially leading to misunderstandings and conflicts.
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